Today's society standards for judging whether a talent is not only limited to their professional knowledge and, more importantly, also their moral standards and personal qualities. In institutions of higher learning, the training and shaping the moral standards of university students is the invisible, intangible but virtually to have an important impact on students of the campus culture. Campus culture is the social part of the mainstream culture, in building a harmonious society of today, through the construction of a free and democratic, healthy and lively campus culture, with the small environment to influence the socio-cultural environment, which advanced the development of social culture,
To promote the goal of a harmonious society has a very important role.
The building of a harmonious campus to be set up to establish a harmonious relationship between the students. Concerned about the difficulty of helping students to help them feel warm and harmonious campus. To maintain a good attitude, treat people with tolerance and with a sincere heart in good faith to change another's heart. Between the students get along well, so as to create harmonious relations.。
你好,最近的一次雅思寫(xiě)作考試的題目是: 12月15日雅思寫(xiě)作題目: Task1: 線(xiàn)圖(圖有點(diǎn)不準確,第二條線(xiàn)和第三條線(xiàn)有兩個(gè)交點(diǎn)) Petrol, coal and natural gas between 1981 and 2000 Task2:How do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas?What are the importance of museums to society? We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. 12月15日雅思寫(xiě)作大作文解析: 不去本地博物館的原因: 1.已經(jīng)非常熟悉當地歷史文化 2.不了解博物館的意義輕視歷史文化 3.工作忙碌沒(méi)時(shí)間4.地方政府缺乏對博物館文化的重視與宣傳。
博物館的意義: 1文物古跡的收集與保護 2.考古科研價(jià)值 3.教育功能,拉近與歷史文明的距離 4.精神文化符號象征更多雅思寫(xiě)作考試回憶:。
One day, I see such a scene in the street: a mother is riding a bike with a young daughter. Child accidentally, in the hands of biscuits out on the ground. Mother immediately stopped, whispered to her daughter said, \"come, let's put the biscuits and thrown into the trash, please?\" Said he carried the baby to get off, they bent down to pick up the ground crumbled cookies.
This is civilization. Civilization etiquette is the foundation of our study and life, is our healthy growth on the shoulder. No civilization, there is no basic moral bottom line, that if we have the advanced scientific and cultural knowledge, for people to have what use to the society? Thousand Wan Xuexue do reality, say is learning should learn to be a person,
Learn to do social people, do civilized people,
Clean environment, civilized campus, starts from me, start from every little thing, let the flower of civilization etiquette on campus in full bloom everywhere.
We do the students from there? Let's save every drop of water, make I save every once electricity, maybe you lift a finger, will bring a beautiful earth, will give people a little warm, let not far from us, civilization to civilization accompanied I was growing up, is with me!
有一天,我在街上看到這樣一幕:一位母親正騎自行車(chē)帶著(zhù)年幼的女兒迎面而來(lái)。孩子一不小心,手中的餅干掉在地上。母親馬上停下車(chē),輕聲對女兒說(shuō):“來(lái),咱們把餅干扔到垃圾桶里去,好嗎?”說(shuō)著(zhù)便把孩子抱下車(chē)來(lái),倆人彎下腰一起去撿地上的碎餅干。
這就是文明。文明禮儀是我們學(xué)習、生活的基礎,是我們健康成長(cháng)的肩膀。沒(méi)有了文明,就沒(méi)有了基本的道德底線(xiàn),那我們縱然擁有了高深的科學(xué)文化知識,對人對已對社會(huì )又有什么用呢?千學(xué)萬(wàn)學(xué)學(xué)做真人,說(shuō)的就是學(xué)習應先學(xué)做人,
學(xué)做文明人,學(xué)做社會(huì )人,
清潔環(huán)境,文明校園,從我做起,從每一件小事做起,讓文明禮儀之花在校園處處盛開(kāi)。
我們做學(xué)生的該從那里?讓我們節約每一滴水,讓我節省每一度電,或許你的舉手之勞,將會(huì )帶給地球一點(diǎn)美麗,將會(huì )帶給人們一點(diǎn)溫暖,讓不文明遠離我們,讓文明伴我成長(cháng),伴我行!
我們中國人從天然資質(zhì)講,不亞于世界上的任何民族,因此我們曾經(jīng)創(chuàng )造了世界先進(jìn)的文明和燦爛的文化,成為世界四大文明古國之一。
但是差不多從明代中期起的這五六百年來(lái),我們卻落后了!而恰恰從這一時(shí)期起,世界上另一個(gè)文明古國所在地的歐洲卻從中世紀的委頓中重新崛起,走到我們前頭去了。這是什么原因?我想這多少跟我們的文化傳統有關(guān),跟我們的文化心態(tài)有關(guān)。
下面僅以我們傳統的建筑文化為例,講點(diǎn)個(gè)人看法。 世界上的建筑(這里主要指大型的、屬于藝術(shù)范疇的公共性建筑),從形式上劃分,基本上有兩類(lèi):。
關(guān)于雅思議論文到底寫(xiě)幾段,不同的老師有不同的說(shuō)法。
我一直都認為衡量文章結構只有兩個(gè)標準:1 能不能把問(wèn)題講清楚;2 考場(chǎng)上有沒(méi)有實(shí)戰意義,有沒(méi)有可操作性。所以我認為,四段式的文章更好,因為1 四段式結構更清晰;2 四段折中式比五段折中式好寫(xiě),更比五段一邊倒好寫(xiě)。
因為什么呢? 因為很明顯,世界上任何一個(gè)命題,正反兩方面都寫(xiě),比只說(shuō)正方或者只說(shuō)反方都更容易寫(xiě)250個(gè)單詞。寫(xiě)一邊倒最大的問(wèn)題就是:40分鐘里面湊出250單詞以上很難。
比如,在劍橋最新的劍橋5當中,劍橋給出了4套Academic類(lèi)作文題范文,其中有兩篇是作為“ an example of a very good answer 來(lái)給出的。一個(gè)明確的信息是:這兩篇考官寫(xiě)的高分范文都是用的折中式,而且都是寫(xiě)的四段式。
我們再看劍橋5里面兩道General Traing類(lèi)議論文的范文,其中一片范文寫(xiě)了6段,但是考官的評語(yǔ)明確說(shuō)了這篇文章“ The paragraphing is not always logical ; G類(lèi)的第二篇范文是五段式,但是如果仔細分析一下,其實(shí)最后一段只是說(shuō)了兩句空話(huà),喊了兩句口號,在一般的議論性文章里面完全是沒(méi)有必要寫(xiě)的。所以,劍橋5里面的考官高分范文,充分說(shuō)明了雅思考試議論文寫(xiě)4段式的合理性。
結論:雅思議論文,四段式在考場(chǎng)上容易操作,而且劍橋考官自己寫(xiě)的范文,大多數都是四段折中式。
浪一層又一層地趕來(lái),碰撞著(zhù)臥在海面的礁石,濺起了水花又落了下來(lái);沖濕了我的腳丫,還頑皮地帶走了我留在沙灘上的印記,作為它永久的珍藏.看著(zhù)大海時(shí)時(shí)奔來(lái),好象永遠不知疲倦;聽(tīng)著(zhù)大海刻刻喧騰,似乎永遠都那么快樂(lè ).立在海邊,海潮在擁抱著(zhù)我,和我一同嬉戲,與我一樣那么開(kāi)朗,活潑.
久久站在大海面前,好象一切都 靜止了,云不再飄,心不再動(dòng),只是頓時(shí)覺(jué)得我們是如此渺小.凝視著(zhù)這無(wú)垠的海,我的心也開(kāi)闊了不少,覺(jué)得自己能包容一切.有句偉大的名言:比海洋更廣闊的是藍天;比藍天更廣闊的是人的胸懷.從城市掙脫出來(lái),望著(zhù)那奔騰的大海,你不由得想張開(kāi)雙臂,迎上去吶喊,撲上去擁抱.這時(shí)候,就會(huì )覺(jué)得胸襟豁然開(kāi)朗,大有包容整個(gè)世界的寬廣.
我終于見(jiàn)到大海了!在看見(jiàn)大海的一順間,我覺(jué)得自己進(jìn)入了一個(gè)嶄新的世界!不過(guò)我在此同時(shí),我看到地平線(xiàn)那兒,水天相接,分不清海和天.就在這時(shí),我對海的那邊的好奇心遠遠的超過(guò)了海這邊的好奇心——海的那邊又是什么呢
On Christmas morning, the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light at two o'clock, and most of them are awake by six o'clock, and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o'clock in the afternoon, the Christmas dinner is brought in. The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten. Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it. The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas holidays comes to an end.。
個(gè)人覺(jué)得如果9分的作文,小作文占3分的話(huà),這篇應該在1.5左右
我水平也不是很高,給你幾個(gè)我的建議把
1.一定分段寫(xiě),我沒(méi)有看到題目,但是我強烈建議文章一定要分段,這樣看起來(lái)更有條理。
2.注意一些小的語(yǔ)法錯誤,例如第二行的the trend in USA, Japan and Sweden is upwards,trend是可數的,upwards最好當副詞用,個(gè)人覺(jué)得做表語(yǔ)并不合適。小的語(yǔ)法錯誤往往帶來(lái)很多的失分。
3.時(shí)態(tài)。The proportion reaches at 15% in USA and 14% in Sweden by 1982.reaches顯然應該為reached。看得出來(lái)這個(gè)圖表牽涉到將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài),你也注意了運用,但是還是遺漏了一些。倒數第二行At 2040, the proportion of population aged 65 and over is quite different from it was in 1940,is應當改用will be,Japan has 改為Japan will have,前面的Sweden enjoys 改為Sweden will enjoy
4.嘗試用一些從句。你的文章中多為一些簡(jiǎn)單句型,從句可以為文章增分。
5.嘗試一些替換詞,old people可以有很多替換詞,你這里old people出現的次數過(guò)于多了,稍顯累贅。senior citizens,elderly people/individuals什么的
6.也看得出來(lái)你學(xué)過(guò)并嘗試運用了一些表示增長(cháng)與下降的詞,也注意了程度上的運用,這些值得贊揚。
就寫(xiě)這么多了,作文需要多練,多看別人寫(xiě)的文章積累經(jīng)驗,祝你雅思有一個(gè)好成績(jì)
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