一. 英語(yǔ)作文開(kāi)頭方式
1、“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”式
一般來(lái)說(shuō),文章的開(kāi)頭應盡量做到“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”,即要用簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言引出文章的話(huà)題,使人一開(kāi)始就能了解文章要說(shuō)明的內容。
① 對于敘事類(lèi)的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭把人物、時(shí)間、事件和環(huán)境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 對于論述性的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭處先闡明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn),接著(zhù)展開(kāi)進(jìn)一步的論述。如“The Time and the Money (時(shí)間和金錢(qián))” 的開(kāi)頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2、回憶性開(kāi)頭
二. 英語(yǔ)作文結尾方式
1、自然結尾,點(diǎn)明主題
隨著(zhù)文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
一般來(lái)說(shuō)應該背一點(diǎn)精彩的句式放在開(kāi)頭用以吸引閱卷老師的注意力,
讓他對你有一個(gè)比較好的第一印象,
在最后結分的時(shí)候把你的分數向上靠
(不要小看這一靠,有時(shí)候1分就是天壤之別!)
但總體基本以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,
不要顯得太過(guò)于注重華麗的詞藻,
當然如果你的水平足夠隨意使用復合句的話(huà)就沒(méi)有這點(diǎn)條條框框,
主要是因為如果你的水平不到家,
容易出現語(yǔ)法或句式的錯誤更加令閱卷老師討厭。
樓上的兄弟說(shuō)的完全不正確!
英語(yǔ)的作文也是和語(yǔ)文一樣按評分標準打分的,
不是只要語(yǔ)法對就好,
舉一個(gè)高考評分標準為例:
1. 本題總分為25分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。
2. 評分時(shí),先根據文章的內容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次
的要求來(lái)衡量,確定或調整檔次,最后給分。
3. 詞數少于 80和多于 120的,從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時(shí),應注意的主要內容為:內容要點(diǎn)、應用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結構的數量和準確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。
5. 拼寫(xiě)與標點(diǎn)符號是語(yǔ)言準確性的一個(gè)方面,評分時(shí),應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)漢詞匯用法均可接受。 6. 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個(gè)檔次。
7. 內容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達,對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務(wù)。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點(diǎn)。
3. 應用了較多的語(yǔ)法結構和詞匯。
4. 語(yǔ)法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強的語(yǔ)言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第四檔(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務(wù)。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語(yǔ)法結構和詞匯能滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的要求。
4. 語(yǔ)法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確,些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語(yǔ)法結構或詞匯所致。
5. 應用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第三檔(適當):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務(wù)。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語(yǔ)法結構和詞匯能滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的要求。
4. 有一些語(yǔ)法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫(xiě)作目的。
第二檔(較差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務(wù)。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內容。
3. 語(yǔ)法結構單調、詞匯項目有限。
4. 有一些語(yǔ)法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤,影響了對寫(xiě)作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務(wù)。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容,寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語(yǔ)法結構單調、詞匯項目有限。
4. 較多語(yǔ)法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤,影響對寫(xiě)作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分:(0分)
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息:內容太少,無(wú)法評判;寫(xiě)的內容均與所要求內容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內容無(wú)法看清。
可能是你用的開(kāi)頭是已經(jīng)用爛的那種啦,
網(wǎng)上找找很多很好的開(kāi)頭的。
一、用于駁性和比較性論文 1. In general, I don't agree with 2. In my opinion, this point of view doesn't hold water. 3. The chief reason why… is that… 4. There is no true that… 5. It is not true that… 6. It can be easily denied than… 7. We have no reason to believe that… 8. What is more serious is that… 9. But it is pity that… 10. Besides, we should not neglect that… 11. But the problem is not so simple. Therefore… 12. Others may find this to be true, but I believer that… 13. Perhaps I was question why… 14. There is a certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem with regard to… 15. Though we are in basic agreement with…,but 16. What seems to be the trouble is… 17. Yet differences will be found, that's why I feel that… 18. It would be reasonable to take the view that …, but it would be foolish to claim that… 19. There is in fact on reason for us so believe that… 20. What these people fail to consider is that… 21. It is one thing to insist that… , it is quite another to show that … 22. Wonderful as A is , however, it has its own disadvantages too. 23. The advantages of B are much greater than A. 24. A's advantage sounds ridiculous when B's advantages are taken into consideration. 二、用于描寫(xiě)圖表和數據 1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998. 2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year. 3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995. 4. It would be expected to increase 5 times. 5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year. 6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996. 7. The total number was lowered by 10%. 8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year. 9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent. 10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995. 11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with… 三、用于解釋性和闡述性論說(shuō)文 1. Everybody knows that… 2. It can be easily proved that… 3. It is true that… 4. No one can deny that 5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is… 6. The chief reason is that… 7. We must recognize that… 8. There is on doubt that… 9. I am of the opinion that… 10. This can be expressed as follows; 11. To take …for an example… 12. We have reason to believe that 13. Now that we know that… 14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned… 15. The change in …largely results from the fact that 16. There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally… 17. A number of factors could account for the development in… 18. Perhaps the primary reason is… 19. It is chiefly responsible of… 20. The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact… 21. Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that… 22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that… 23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon… 24. Different people observes it in different ways. 四、用于文章的開(kāi)頭 1. As the proverb says… 2. It goes without saying tan… 3. Generally speaking… 4. It is quite clear than because… 5. It is often said that … 6. Many people often ask such question:“…?” 7. More and more people have come to realize… 8. There is no doubt that… 9. Some people believe that… 10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case? 11. One great man said that… 12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention. 13. In the past several years there has been… 14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether… 15. Currently there is a widespread concern that… 16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that… 17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of … 18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently. 五、用于文章的結尾 1. from this point of view… 2. in a word… 3. in conclusion… 4. on account of this we can find that… 5. the result is dependent on… 6. therefore, these findings reveal the following information: 7. thus, this is the reason why we must… 8. to sum up … 9. as far as…be concerned, I believe that… 10. It is obvious that… 11. There is little doubt that… 12. There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful 13. None of the solutions is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way. 14. It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on… 15. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that… 六、用于論證和說(shuō)明 1. As it is described that… 2. It has been illustrated that… 3. It provides a good example of… 4. We 。
一、說(shuō)明原因型模塊 Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7). 注釋?zhuān)?1、XX的第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn) 2、支持XX的做法 3、不支持XX的做法 4、XX的第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn) 5、舉例證明優(yōu)點(diǎn)二 6、說(shuō)明XX優(yōu)點(diǎn)三的影響二、說(shuō)明原因型模塊 In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).三、說(shuō)明原因型模塊 For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore, (7). 注釋?zhuān)?1、人們針對XX的態(tài)度和舉措 2、歸納現狀 3、第一個(gè)原因 4、第二個(gè)原因 5、第三個(gè)原因 6、重申造成現狀的最重要原因四、說(shuō)明原因型模塊 These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since(5),it is natural that (6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future. 注釋?zhuān)?1、提出論題 2、說(shuō)明現狀 3、理由一 4、理由二 5、理由三 6、理由三引起的后果 7、解決方法提綱式作文寫(xiě)作模板 1、對立觀(guān)點(diǎn)式 A. 有人認為X 是好事,贊成X,為什么? B. 有人認為X 是壞事,反對X,為什么? C. 我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個(gè)原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個(gè)原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反對X 的第一個(gè)理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個(gè)壞處。
2、批駁觀(guān)點(diǎn)式 A.一個(gè)錯誤觀(guān)點(diǎn)。 B.我不同意。
Many people argue that 錯誤觀(guān)點(diǎn)。By saying that, they mean 對這個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)的進(jìn)一步解釋。
An example they have presented is that 一個(gè)例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個(gè)錯誤觀(guān)點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯誤觀(guān)點(diǎn)的影響)。
There might be some element of truth in these people's belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀(guān)點(diǎn)相反的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下參照辯論文的議論文寫(xiě)法)。
3、社會(huì )問(wèn)題(現象)式 A.一個(gè)社會(huì )問(wèn)題或者現象 B.產(chǎn)生的原因 C.對社會(huì )和我們生活的影響 D.如何杜絕。(如果是問(wèn)題的話(huà)) E.前景的預測。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 調查內容說(shuō)明這種現象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫(xiě)法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 參照辯論式議論文的寫(xiě)法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……辯論式議論文模版(一) Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 觀(guān)點(diǎn)1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 觀(guān)點(diǎn)2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 論據1. More importantly, 論據2. Most important of all, 論據3. In summary, 總結觀(guān)點(diǎn)。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。
或From above, we can predict that 預測。 辯論式議論文模版(二) People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 觀(guān)點(diǎn)1. While others point out that 觀(guān)點(diǎn)2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 論據1. For another, 論據2. Last but not the least, 論據3. To conclude, 總結觀(guān)點(diǎn). As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。
或。
一、開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式
1.開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一:
名人名言:有人問(wèn)了,“我沒(méi)有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語(yǔ)名言?”很好辦:編!原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng )造出來(lái)的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理,而且沒(méi)準將來(lái)我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經(jīng)典句型:A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” (適用于已記住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用于自編名言)更多經(jīng)典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2.開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二:
數字統計原理:要想更有說(shuō)服力,就應該用實(shí)際的數字來(lái)說(shuō)明。原則上在議論文當中不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一,但編無(wú)妨,只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起來(lái)這個(gè)數字文縐縐的,其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的,下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,大學(xué)生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車(chē)。
Youth
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,在某個(gè)大學(xué),學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂(lè )。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:A recent statistics shows that …
二、結尾萬(wàn)能公式
1.結尾萬(wàn)能公式一:如此結論
說(shuō)完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷,領(lǐng)導長(cháng)篇大論,到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類(lèi)的話(huà),我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差,等待領(lǐng)導說(shuō)結束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō),開(kāi)頭很好,也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”,但說(shuō)無(wú)妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ):
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2.結尾萬(wàn)能公式二:如此建議
如果說(shuō)“如此結論”是結尾最沒(méi)用的廢話(huà),那么“如此建議”應該是最有價(jià)值的廢話(huà)了,因為這里雖然也是廢話(huà),但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典,因為考官本來(lái)經(jīng)常考這個(gè)句型,而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái),你說(shuō)考官會(huì )怎么想呢?更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
一)段首句1. 關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
一些人認為…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.2. 俗話(huà)說(shuō)(常言道)……,它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場(chǎng)合仍然適用。There is an old saying______. It's the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3. 現在,……,它們給我們的日常生活帶來(lái)了許多危害。
首先,……;其次,……。更為糟糕的是…… Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.4. 現在,……很普遍,許多人喜歡……,因為……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays, it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5. 任何事物都是有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 關(guān)于……人們的觀(guān)點(diǎn)各不相同,一些人認為(說(shuō))……,在他們看來(lái),…… People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人類(lèi)正面臨著(zhù)一個(gè)嚴重的問(wèn)題……,這個(gè)問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴重。Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8. ……已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門(mén)話(huà)題,特別是在年青人當中,將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著(zhù)越來(lái)越重要的作用,它給我們帶來(lái)了許多好處,但同時(shí)也引發(fā)一些嚴重 的問(wèn)題。______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。
很顯然……,但是 為什么呢?According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that ______ while. Obviously, ______, but why?(二)中間段落句1. 相反,有一些人贊成……,他們相信……,而且,他們認為……。On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time, they say____.2. 但是,我認為這不是解決……的好方法,比如……。
最糟糕的是……。But I don't think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___.3. ……對我們國家的發(fā)展和建設是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。
首先,……。而且……,最重要 的是…… ______is necessary and important to our country's development and construction. First,______. What's more, _____.Most important of all,______.4. 有幾個(gè)可供我們采納的方法。
首先,我們可以……。There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______5. 面臨……,我們應該采取一系列行之有效的方法來(lái)……。
一方面……,另一方面,Confronted with______, we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,______For another, ______6. 早就應該拿出行動(dòng)了。比如說(shuō)……,另外……。
所有這些方法肯定會(huì )……。It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.7. 為什么……?第一個(gè)原因是……;第二個(gè)原因是……;第三個(gè)原因是……。
總的來(lái)說(shuō),……的主要原 因是由于…… Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好壞兩個(gè)方面一樣,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.9. 盡管如此,我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.10. 完全同意……這種觀(guān)點(diǎn)(陳述),主要理由如下:I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.(三)結尾句1. 至于我,在某種程度上我同意后面的觀(guān)點(diǎn),我認為…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ……2. 總而言之,整個(gè)社會(huì )應該密切關(guān)注……這個(gè)問(wèn)題。只有這樣,我們才能在將來(lái)……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future.3. 但是,……和……都有它們各自的優(yōu)勢(好處)。例如,……,而……。
然而,把這兩者相比較,我更傾向于(喜歡)……But ……and……h(huán)ave heir own advantages. For example, …… while…… Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to……4. 就我個(gè)人而言,我相信……,因此,我堅信美好的未來(lái)正等著(zhù)我們。因為…… Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is 。
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